Notbad

So this was notbad the characters were not too shabby, the music was cool and seemed fitting especially for all the action scenes actually the music really seemed to work well here. the "NEXT-BUTTION" is what I had some issues with you may want to upgrade it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So those buttons so small, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont like that style you can always go back to the other way. But for the mostpart it seems better if it was flowing like a movie without the buttons.

~X~

needs more work

I think you could have done much more with the cars. Nextime, make sure the person or people in the story talk instead of an arrow button, I don't like those things.

sbermeister - see my profile

Interesting story. I liked it.

BLAM

Blamnation

wth(what the hell?!?!)

Ok,so what was that?!I really hope the next episode is better!!!