Very good
Nice idea and good animation. We should make together an other animation witch should be much longer.
Author Comments
Thanks for positive comments.
Please remember, that I'm just a newbie starting a flash hobby.
Nobody is Professional at start.
BTW, the who are saying that this movie is kinda short:
This clip is just part (FIRST STAGE) of the movie.
But thank you for reviewing.
Okay?
OUJEE SUCK MY .. Okay what i gonna say.. Its.. *thinks* GAY WAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA sorry :D its good i guess
villeyp responds:
=P Stop cursing.
But thanks for 5...
....
I coulndy read what they were saing because it was to fast,also the movement was laggy.
villeyp responds:
Yeah i have been complained about that. :)
Thanks for review!
I will longer the texts and place a BGM for movie.
The lagg of the movement wasn't lagging.
Its the walking style. I will change it in next movie.
Choppy ...
mixed in with a theme that has been done to death, but it still shows real promise. My suggestions: Make this flash yours ... try adding a little dimension to your flash that other artists have missed. It could be as simple as a different color in the levels you are making. Give it your artistic signature. Also, you may want to make things a little more fluid and have the text stay up a little longer.
villeyp responds:
Thanks for reviewing.
I know my flash misses a lot, but i just upped this to NG
because of some information what could i add to this.
My flash skills doesn't match so well to making dimesions.
But i can try. I hope all will enjoy a good movie from me sometime. :D
let's go:
what's good:
preloader - and it's madness!
there's a storyline - however it's not well defined
what's bad:
poor sounds - there's no music, but the bullet sound is ok
the text goes too fast - no way you can read what he says
i won't mention it's short, but it could have more action in it.
villeyp responds:
Thanks for reviewing and giving the basics +/- of this clip.
More BGS and an BGM are coming. :)
I think i don't have time today to change things, but I'll add 'em tomorrow.