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The Random Story [preview

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Timmy wakes up in some random forrest and dosnt know how he got there so he walks around and finds some random thing


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Ummmm this is an experimentel comedy that im doing there is 5 episodes this one is meeting hes friends created the full title of it is - The Random Story - Waken Up


Enjoy please rate and comment also i dont have a pre loader or sound sorry ill hopfully have sound by the 3rd one

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...what was that about? It ended explaining nothing.

Not nice

OK, you need to improve like...everything. You should have sound, the movie sould be about something, I mean...WTF? Dude you really need to improve, so dont haste to upload the next... you better take your time and make a nice movie.
3/10 I guess for the effort

SuperArtist responds:

thanks for the advise man and i am spending time on the next one :)

weak

It needs:
sound
plot
to be longer
and have more time spent on it

Credits & Info

Views
3,079
Votes
4
Score
2.55 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 3, 2008
5:16 AM EST