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...what was that about? It ended explaining nothing.
Author Comments
Timmy wakes up in some random forrest and dosnt know how he got there so he walks around and finds some random thing
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Ummmm this is an experimentel comedy that im doing there is 5 episodes this one is meeting hes friends created the full title of it is - The Random Story - Waken Up
Enjoy please rate and comment also i dont have a pre loader or sound sorry ill hopfully have sound by the 3rd one
Not nice
OK, you need to improve like...everything. You should have sound, the movie sould be about something, I mean...WTF? Dude you really need to improve, so dont haste to upload the next... you better take your time and make a nice movie.
3/10 I guess for the effort
SuperArtist responds:
thanks for the advise man and i am spending time on the next one :)
weak
It needs:
sound
plot
to be longer
and have more time spent on it