Ups and Downs

The storyline seems to be pretty good but the way you show us is too slow. It makes me sleepy, not in a good (calming) way. The only thing that put this to a whole other level are the graphics which stood out the moment I pressed play. Speed up the animation, cut things that don't need to be said, and this will definitely get a 4.00+

OH!!!

this is writen in loas and the sounds are from WLO and its so cute i cant look away oh god

Cute, but...

Honestly, I found this excruciating to watch. It's cute and a good story, but it is very, very slow. Even if you chose to show what steps are being taken to make things, there is no need to show it that slowly. I do really like the style and the idea behind it though. Just several things could be shortened or cut out to pick up the pace. For example, there's no real need for us to know the character's names, which would eliminate the "introduction" portions. As it is, I don't know that too many people outside of Newgrounds would watch the entire thing, which means the message won't get through. But overall great animation, very smooth. Just try to work on your pacing. :)

very light hearted

very nice, in fact it made me smile slightly simply cause the stories kinda sweet.

that was.........cute

cute but a littel long