I can see the your piece of work here did contain some effot. This is evident from the fact that there was a nice story and ending. However the flash was badly animated and I get the impression that you were trying to be too clever. I see a flash like this and I feel that there should be some great meaning bahind it because of the touhing music and the giving to the poor. To be honest it made the whole flash muddled. Two people were generous in their own way, then the old woman was invited round for dinner. There is nothing deep to that.The whole set up of the animation was strange, but i commend you for effort and in all it wasent that bad.