Some of the stuff we could see here looks pretty good, others where in need of some more effort There is some good Potential it all though, Some stuff cane have a Refined effort about it all though. This actually reminded me of the old "ESKIMO-BOB" stuff lol, Well I have to admit that this was actually cute and the "CHARACTERS" are smooth-lines the subtitles was a nice little touch here, and overall you had a cute little story so nice job all around. So I keep a phrase for a certain few and that is appetite for creativity and thats exactly what you have created with this flick right here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. I like this production, hope to see some improvments soon. go with ideas may they be good or average ideas maybe one or two will help and improve on things. This was not short by any means but I can see it being longer with more of the fun story you already have.