Hi to all,
This is my first submission to newgrounds. So it is not super funny. And to some ppl, the animation may not be fluid enough. But I just want to try something cute. I have not learn any actionscript yet. so there is no replay function at the end of this clip. This is actually a parody of a famous frictional swordman from a series of novel. Some asian viewer may know about him??
It does not matter if you do not know.
A very brief background info on this clip:
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This charactor Dugu dugu is a novice swordman setting out to make a mark in the world by battling famous warriors from around the world. Some way or another, he doesn't lose. (despite having a low level. He is currently only level 2, his opponent is lvl 45.)
The whole world works on same principle as a action RPG game.
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Some text are drawn in chinese to retain the feeling of china. (personal opinion : ) ) Anyway, it is nothing important, jus some small info on the charactor and the opening credit.
All constructive comments are welcome.
Great Job!
I find it quite interesting and not too shabby. The music can be improved from the transition from the Lu Zhi Zhi training to Du Gu Du Gu training. I find it a bit abrupt. The drawing part of Du Gu Du Gu knocking at the tree I think can be improved. Other than that, I generally find everything quite smooth, especially the fighting scene. A great job for your first flash.
Good bu listen to the people!!""
Doin' great!"
eh.... tks. Your comment is the shortest and your score is lowest. Hmm...i dunno how to respond. So mayb a 'thanks'? ok , tks!
Great!
WOW! Nice job man!
Really cool animation, great graphics and a nice story! I just don't liked the sounds, but they are ok too ^^
Keep working on it! :D
damnit.. this clip is actually meant more for me to try out the timing of my sound effect aplication. Nevertheless, tks alot for the comment. 8 points is really out of my expectation , haha. Too high. I will try to find better sound effects next time. Tks again1
Critical Hit !!!
Hello There!
Not bad at all! It was pretty funny and I liked the drawings. Maybe the animation could be more fluid and the movie could run a bit faster. Dont let the crowd the time to yawn! You need to blind us all with some lightspeed action.
one lightning speed action clip coming up!! tks for the feedback!
Woah.
I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.
Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.
The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.
tks alot for the comment and time spend in watching my clip. I will try to improve myself in the next clip .