Great
I don't use sound on my computer, so it didn't bother me much. Graphics were good, great concept.. not too original, but still.
Author Comments
The title "3 things I hate" pretty much explains itself. These are three of the most aggrevating things known to me.
It has been a small project of mine to start animating solely by experimenting with my Wacom tablet and some programs (Toonboom Studio in this case). This single project took me about 3 months on-again off-again work, and is my very first flash (that's over 6 seconds long) and was made entirely using ToonBoom Studio Pro 4, my Wacom tablet and my right hand.
Originally, this started out as "10 things I hate", but was cut down to 3, because i was too lazy complete the rest.
So enjoy my very first submission into NG!
Note: there is no sound, no pre-loader, the animation is pretty basic, and is in no way related to the movie "10 things I hate about you" (I've never even seen it)
This is what I think.
Okay, so you decided to make a quick Flash movie of the things you hate.
Sound: Where's the sound? You could of added some sound effects and dialogue into the movie. It just makes the movie boring. Thank god the movie wasn't so long or else this would of been a very big problem.
Sound: 0/10
Graphics: About the graphics, it's okay. The animation is well done, but you could of risen up the FPS a little bit more so it look better. You use the correct colors for the drawings.
Graphics: 8/10
Presentation: Like I said before the movie was meant to be short. That's fine, but it could of been a little longer. The one part where you really messed up is when you didn't add a preloader for the movie. It's very bad for the poeple who have slow computers because the movie will automatically stop and they'll have to wait till it plays again. It could of been better if you also added scene buttons to skip or go back to one section of the movie. On the positive side, the movie was pretty funny, but not the best or the worst.
Presentation: 5/10
Overall: The movie wasn't that great. The biggest killer is you did not add sound to the movie. I recommend you to go to websites like flashkit to download sound effects.
Overall: 5/10
linkinparkmaarten responds:
thanks for the advice, i'll keep it in mind
and just in my defence: it is my first flash :)
alright.
The animation quality is actually quite good for amateur level, and it's actually quite funny too, but it would've been alot more funny if it had some sound.
Pretty nice anyway, good luck.
linkinparkmaarten responds:
thanks
well done
I really enjoyed this one. So true. I hate emos too
true
oh so very very true. 3/5 could use some sound though