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this is a flash i made about the life of a victim in one of the madness maovies itis unfinished due to computer problems
when i finish it it will have music, a preloader , and an actual ending and itll look less bad
ill try to fix my computer soon
this is my first flash btw

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Dont give up because people give bad reviews.There are the assholes who say it's crap when in reality they have never made a flash.So do what im doing,Remake the flash,putting in everything you've learned,and resubmit it and pray for good resaults!

the real vers.

no it does not have an ending
it's the same thing
the end just says something
dude be more creative
and i can't believe this reached 9mb

Here's my take:

1. You need a preloaderhttp://www.newgrounds.com/do wnloads/preloaders/

2. KISS Principle: Keep Introductions Short and Sweet. Otherwise the viewer gets bored.

3. Frame rate. Up it to at least 24 per second.

4. Adding a simple stop function to the last frame keeps it from looping.

5. Don't just slap a song on and call it good. You need to constrain it to the video so it doesn't overlap itself.

Kudos for trying, but you have a long way to go.

darkenedmirror responds:

thanks for the review when my computers fixed im gonna improve it

0/10 for one reason, you must learn from this.

Umm, maybe you did not read and are not use to submitting flashes, but tutorials/unfinished work goes into the NG Alphas. its in the text before you submit something.

People hate it when you submit Unfinished flashes. sorry. Just telling you.

Is good

But It was not a good idea put an incomplete animation, finish up and then submit it.

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Nov 26, 2008
5:24 PM EST