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Don't play this. Play rol-ovir 2 instead.
needs some deffinent improvement
besides the fact the words where spelled weird i could read them unline your taiping game you have where i can't reed yoo daid
please spell right because the bad spelling really gets on my nerves.
make it longer
make a highscores table
I hope that 7/10 isn't just for the readable font? I mean, I assume you enjoyed the mechanics?
Again, valid criticisms. Thanks for the review.
You'd like Skears DX.
Now this game definatley has potential, the idea of the game is neat, simple and fun to do. Although this one is short, more levels, custimization and possibly a highscores table would help this submission. Even though this game was short I had fun playing it, all in all, not a bad game it just needs some refining. And better spelling.
Thanks for all the suggestions for improvement.
Not sure what you'd want to customise - the cursor? The graphics? There doesn't really seem to be a need.
I'm agreed on most other things and definitely the spelling.
It's a good game, nice concept and smooth simple gameplay. And the best of all, the filesize is tiny, it loads quicker than I can click the mouse, lmao. Graphics could be better and a little music wouldn't hurt, oher than that it's perfect. Keep it up!
Hehe. When you've got ultra-simple graphics, no music and few levels, there's no reason for a loading bar.
Author's comments: Play rol-ovir 2 instead
...I'm hoping it will be better than this.
I realise you made this before you started making the skears game, so I guess I can't expect it to be any better than them... because it is worse. Shit graphics and presentation - just text on a white screen - no audio, 1 minute of gameplay, and a score of 3.77..... mindboggling! haha. This definately needed some re-thinking.
The review on its own is very insubstantial. But of course a) it's a very insubstantial game and b) you'd just reviewed all the Mini Skears games.
: ...I'm hoping it will be better than this.
I realise you made this before you started making the skears game, so I guess I can't expect it to be any better than them... because it is worse.
Sensible line of thought and logical conclusion.
: Shit graphics and presentation - just text on a white screen - no audio, 1 minute of gameplay,
More like 30s
: and a score of 3.77..... mindboggling! haha. This definately needed some re-thinking.
Considering the nature of the submission, it's a fair review. You do put some effort into listing all the shit things about this submission.
I'd like to know if it was genuinely just the presentation and short length that put you off or if there were other issues you had with the gameplay.
It's kind of unclear in that regard.
I know I wasn't supposed to play this game, but I thought I should anyway just to find out what it was. The text was pretty funny and I liked that, but the game didn't have much substance. Only two levels that weren't very challenging isn't a very good game. There was also very few good graphics and no sound, which again is a bad thing.
A far better review than the game deserves. Praise and criticism abound. Maybe there could be more of a summary. A short line at the end.
Nice review though.
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