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First: Im sorry.

This is what happens when you're at school and has nothing to do.

Enjoy(Or something)!

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I quite liked it

It has nice soft colours for the background, smooth animating, appropriate music and some funny parts. I chuckled at the gun part.

The only thing that could be more fluid is the music loop. It seems to just be abrupt when it ends then goes to loop again. Otherwise for a random little flash, this was fun.

sprittusj responds:

Making a new one tomorrow after all the good reviews:D
And the loop wasnt like that on the flash file, maybe I did something at the end that screwed it up.
Thanks for the great review.


that was nice it cheered me up

sprittusj responds:

you're review cheered me up:)

There could be someting on here

This video did live up to its name and was extremely random. However everone that has reviwed this flash have seemed to pick up that this animation really flows, with great shapes being drawn out really nicely. well and to be honest if you were to do a proper flash with fluid animation like this then i believe that you will be highly commended by all. This is a type of animation that we dont see from a lot of people and I thought that this was quite good. As I said make a proper flash with a good plot and similar animation to this and well you get the idea.

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Ok, this wasn't bad, and can be much better with some easy improvements. The main thing would be to make your lines more singular so that it looks like they are growing, rather than you just adding segments on. It would make it look much more fluid. Also, try to change the speed of your animating at some points, makes it more interesting. Nice musical choice for this movie.



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Nov 24, 2008
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