Potential.
The names where a bit out there. But I believe that you can deliver this story very nicely. Please continue, I am interested.
Author Comments
The first installment of the Bronzeman series. It is set in a world where technology and magic exist side by side. The events depicted take place after a world wide war between a demon named Reshxeel, who tried to extinguish magic in favor of robotics controlled by him, and Arkin a former mage who takes up the arcane arts once again to defend humanity and follows a former general of Reshxeel's: Johnathan Winters
Kxs responds:
Heh I have trouble with names sometimes
nice
Wish it could have been a bit longer, and try to animate the story a bit more than just plain text, I'll keep an eye out for the sequel
Awesome
Love it
cool
since it was just a prologue, you cant review much, but get the proper thing up! and perhaps make the writing at the start slower and fix his walking.
Looks like this is going to be really good!
You've definitely got my interest piqued. This particular flash ended a bit awkwardly in the middle of something - that might be something to pay attention to next time, but still, a very intriguing introduction. I hope you don't stop like so many do when they're fresh out of the gate with a new idea for a series - this looks like it has a lot of potential. :-)
Kxs responds:
You're absolutely right about the ending in the middle. The next part was actually intended to be connected but if I didn't actually divide it up I'd get too bogged down. Thanks for the kind words and yeah i know exactly what you mean. I get pissed when there's a good movie promising to be a series that never develops
