Too short man, too short!
I love these vids but again this is way to short to be enjoyed properly. sorry. and although hardly anyone agrees, i think that the music was ok.
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my first attempt at actually using flash software to make an animation...i doubt this will pass but i just wanted to see if it would :P...i promise that i will practice a lot and my work will be *somewhat* better :D
(i'm telling myself that if this DOES pass (i will be amazed), it will probably not have a high score...probably in the 1.0s or something and will negatively affect my BA so i will PROBABLY remove it...)
Dude, Remove it whilst you can.
good imagination, clean up the sloppy lines, add more up beat music such as
ParagonX9 if they allow you but, overall first attempt? to be quite frank well done at least it passed
GlueyMcGee responds:
i will change the music to a paragon x9 tune. Thanks!
Neat!
I like stuff like this. Even though it's slow, I see a good amount of creativity in it. My only advice to you is that you should trim down the song so that it ends at the end of the movie. That way, it doesn't overlap if you replay it and it will cut down the loading time by a lot.
GlueyMcGee responds:
i will trim the song down! Thanks.
Better luck next time
Nothing too exceptional, but I've seen worse and you deserve some credit. A little music would be nice and the lines just look messy. I wish you luck in animating and I hope this passes.
GlueyMcGee responds:
Thanks a lot! i can't believe this didn't affect my BA at all...:)...I will add music but i just didn't want a guy to say "hey this was amazing" just because his song was in it.
it's simple
if you know it won't make it to newgrounds, then why bother submitting it?
GlueyMcGee responds:
lol...it passed XD
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