Not the best, but not the worst I've seen.
Pros:
1. Plot is very good.
2. Overall story is good.
Cons:
1. Terrible grammer.
2. Repetitive fight scenes.
3. Bad spites.
4. Dialogue was too fast.
Recomendations:
1. Learn better spriting techniques.
2. Spell-check your dialogue, or get someone to check it for you.
Overall score:
2/5
4/10