hmmm
you couled have put a body there and it might have been a bigger score.
Author Comments
made this to kill writers block, seemed to work
i don't care what needs fixing
expect updates between real flash submissions
i don't care if you review but if you do ill respond.
TheL1st responds:
wow thanks for the advice i didnt really ask for =D
It remind me of ''Boneland's stray bullet'' .
Bad points : there is no backgrounds , scene selection , easter egg , plot ( i know it mean to be pointless for the lulz ) and the characters didn't have feets and arms. Bleeding is mostly associate with violence ( there wasn't very much blood for just a violence flash )
This could get 2x better by adding arm and feet to the charcter. There was't any humour expect for the ''!'' of the guys while fleeing from the flying gun , a flying gun , LOL !
Good point : It has an animation , this is not spam , it worth the watching but it's kinda ''meh'' to be honest , there was violence ( you reached the goal of your title ) and it was a valuable flash , but it will get forget soon because of his lack of anatomies. It was not bas , in fact , i liked it.
Well , I hope i may helped you in your ( maybe ) next flash , peace. If you want , you can comment on my news in my user page , feel free to do it.
Go and check ''Boneland's stray bullet'' to see why it has the same concept ( but funnier ) as your flash. The flash is in ultra violent collection.
TheL1st responds:
i dont really care about devolping the ideas or characters or blood. its just something i do to pass time while i try to write my next serious project. im going to delete this in a few days
lame
2 things
#1 probs one of the wors things u can do is nto show effort. for example " i dont care what needs fixing" to me thats an instant 0
and the animation was all lame only 1 sound no story. hardly enouigh violence either.
make it betta :D
TheL1st responds:
it sort of is a beta numb nuts... if i may quote myself
":::expect updates between real flash submissions:::"
and unless u have a broken gun its gonna make the same sound every time. i show effort in my real flashes. not ones i make while im trying to write real flashes, otherwise i get too involved in something thats not worth getting involved in
A+ for violence
I love a good poinless violent flash. This is a great one you did a good job lol
TheL1st responds:
thanks, good job for countering captain dumbasses (0 below your review)
I don't care either. :)
You don't care what needas fixing, you don't care about cirtiscism, you don't care if this is shit or not, well, i don't care about giving it other score than 0.
Here you go.
TheL1st responds:
thanks! =D