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just violence

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made this to kill writers block, seemed to work

i don't care what needs fixing
expect updates between real flash submissions

i don't care if you review but if you do ill respond.

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you couled have put a body there and it might have been a bigger score.

TheL1st responds:

wow thanks for the advice i didnt really ask for =D

It remind me of ''Boneland's stray bullet'' .

Bad points : there is no backgrounds , scene selection , easter egg , plot ( i know it mean to be pointless for the lulz ) and the characters didn't have feets and arms. Bleeding is mostly associate with violence ( there wasn't very much blood for just a violence flash )

This could get 2x better by adding arm and feet to the charcter. There was't any humour expect for the ''!'' of the guys while fleeing from the flying gun , a flying gun , LOL !

Good point : It has an animation , this is not spam , it worth the watching but it's kinda ''meh'' to be honest , there was violence ( you reached the goal of your title ) and it was a valuable flash , but it will get forget soon because of his lack of anatomies. It was not bas , in fact , i liked it.

Well , I hope i may helped you in your ( maybe ) next flash , peace. If you want , you can comment on my news in my user page , feel free to do it.

Go and check ''Boneland's stray bullet'' to see why it has the same concept ( but funnier ) as your flash. The flash is in ultra violent collection.

TheL1st responds:

i dont really care about devolping the ideas or characters or blood. its just something i do to pass time while i try to write my next serious project. im going to delete this in a few days


2 things
#1 probs one of the wors things u can do is nto show effort. for example " i dont care what needs fixing" to me thats an instant 0
and the animation was all lame only 1 sound no story. hardly enouigh violence either.
make it betta :D

TheL1st responds:

it sort of is a beta numb nuts... if i may quote myself

":::expect updates between real flash submissions:::"

and unless u have a broken gun its gonna make the same sound every time. i show effort in my real flashes. not ones i make while im trying to write real flashes, otherwise i get too involved in something thats not worth getting involved in

A+ for violence

I love a good poinless violent flash. This is a great one you did a good job lol

TheL1st responds:

thanks, good job for countering captain dumbasses (0 below your review)

I don't care either. :)

You don't care what needas fixing, you don't care about cirtiscism, you don't care if this is shit or not, well, i don't care about giving it other score than 0.

Here you go.

TheL1st responds:

thanks! =D

Credits & Info

1.80 / 5.00

Nov 17, 2008
9:46 PM EST