Hey folks! Ash here~
This is my first flash EVER, and of course I decided to share it with you guys.
It's a test, so I could feel the waters of the famed adobe program and get myself used to the workings and going on's of the software.
In this, the first of several episodes I have planned; Our hero Ash faces off against 'The Animator' and has a bit of an argument over the lack of a background.
Remember, this is my first flash ever~ So be gentle and please leave some tips!
Thanks!
Ash~
Not bad~
That was pretty funny, you did very nice, especially for a beginning flash. 8/10 Unfortunately I couldn't give you a 10 due to some very fixable errors, slow the text down just a wee bit, couldn't catch the longer of the replies, other than that, good luck with the series! Keep it up =]
~Leviathanz~
Thanks a lot for the review. you're right too. I had some trouble nailing a few things. I'd really like to get another episode banged out too but I'm not entirely sure where to go from here.
But don't worry, I've got some ideas swirling around inside the void between my ears! Thanks again!
Heee hee. Class. :-)
It was very funny! lol!
The walking animation could be worked on..you should use graphic+motion tween instead of keyframes.
It's up to you though.
FABNT! son of a bitch!
XD nice review; thank you! and yes you're right!
Come back to IRC if you ever get the chance ;p just don't be so douchy! ;p
Loved It
Ello Luv!! I personally, though it was KickA$$. Made me laugh the entire time.
It was completely adorable and I can't wait for the next one.
Hugs & Kisses
Not bad.
Very simple, but not bad.
I would like to see some of your future work with more time put into it because I think you showed some potential in this test.
Thank you very much! I plan to do a series out of the first one I did here today. I appreciate your review!
o man
i love the middle part since to me that was funny^_^ nice job
Thanks for the review o man!~
Yes, I do love the 'whack' when he falls over personally ;p
