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I thought it was great! Good job!
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Music by Lemon Demon
A music video to one of the wierdest songs....ever! The song was made at the last minute for a song contest.....it didn't win, and consiquently doesn't make any sense....which is exactly why I had to make a music video for it.
NOTE: I am still a beginner in flash and this is my first flash animation on here, commenting with ways to improve will help me in the future.
Not terrible
The animation for what it was is very smooth and flows very well. It's just your drawings in general which could use some work. i can't draw for crap that's why i do voice acting and writing so not like i can do better, but to do well on this site the artwork needs to be taken up a few notches. And just on a side note that is not the weirdest song ever haha trust me.
meh
It's a tad too short. Try a longer song next time?
Your art and animation could also be improved upon.
Cuddlesnowy responds:
Hi, thanks for the input.
I deliberatly chose the shortest song possible so as to help my animation skills. Slowly, I will go on to longer songs when my flash skills increase.
I'm just beginning in flash, and I hope to improve to bigger (and hopefully better ;) ) flashes in the future.
- Cuddlensowy
Not bad...
But not exactly great, either. You have some good ideas and most people would compliment you on having both sound and color (this seems to be a big thing). However, the animations looked of rather poor quality and lacked depth/definition. I would have liked to see an expansion of your creative sense in the instrumental repetition. Try to be more precise and complex with your animations, especially when depicting people. Not bad for a first try, though!
xD i luv this
it's a really weird song but i like it :D