well, its allright. i know the blood sucks, but i cant find any decent tutorials. help would be much appriciated.
Shows potential
Ok so the animation was shoddy and the text was badly rendered, but I found the humour was spot on. The comic timing of the punch line was great. Write a script worth several minutes of flash and improve everything about the way you animate it and you could create something brilliant.
Thanks for the advice Briton. Why people think that that's a useless review is beyond me.
Short
If this is so short,you could have made the text stay for a few more time
I was going to, but when i did it stayed on for too long which didnt make it look very good.
Fair Enough.
Nice Little joke you have there. Its not vary orginal and you animation needs a little work. I hope you improve your skills in you next flash. Good Luck
Thanks for the comment! Ill try and improve.
Lol
Not bad... Not bad at all it was pretty funny actually. But it was pretty short.
Overall it was cool 3/5
Thanks!
well
for good squirting blood, it honestly just looks the best possible if you make it a darker color and put the alpha at about 70-80
Ill try it next time, thansk for the advice!