One problem.
Advertising for the army shouldn't be done. Why would someone join the army knowing they would go overseas and possibly get killed. I take a bit of offence to this, only because one of the Canadian soldiers that was killed in Afghanistan last year was one of my good friends, and my brother almost died several times as well. Some people should just think about things before they decide to make something like this.
Though the animation was weill done, I will give you that.