I'm sorry but that was just disturbing. I really cant think of a way to improve this.
To be honest..
This was quite sick making, and disturbing.
Good and different
A bit weird in spots. But it was good animation and very well done.
What the f..ell is that? It's sick, tottaly like Salad Fingers which you created before. I expected something new.
You can say FUCK, I won't tell you off.
I'm concerned for the safety of everything living knowing that you walk the earth.