Mr Unlucky encounters a cola, and wishes he never did....
This flash is not made by me in particular but it is made by 4urentertainment, my little company...
So watch and enjoy.
Music : Scatman by Scatman.
Needs some work.
The only part of the movie I found amusing, was the last scene. I would recommend having him use different tools to attempt to open the can, rather than jumping/kicking it. Also, changing the music might help, although I'm not sure how successful a video on opening a can of soda can be.
Bad music.
A really bad choice of music. It's such an irritating song. I also think you could add a lot more to this. It doesn't look like you spent much time preparing this flash, and the art could be greatly improved.
5 marks is the only proper rating for this video
The whole video was not reall funny at all. The humor was tasteless and childish. The only really funny part was that he had a high voice. However I can commend you in a couple of places. Not many people who submit flashes to daily polled put in their videos a little trailor at the start to explain just what the video is about. Most people give a title and dive straight into the video. The ending was fairly funny as well. I think that what you need to do is make another flash that is simple and has a basic plot and ending to it with some sort of twist. If people like that flash then I believe that it will will give you the confidence to make another comedy flsh but to a much higher standard. With flsh like this you need to keep making more and more until you reallt get the hang of it, then you will start to impress.
Cliche Violence
Great song in the opening. Where did you get that? However, I feel like opening is too long and I thought it was the main toon for quite a while. The random violence is kind of dumb, both in the opening and the main toon.
The sped-up voice is difficult to understand, and at first I thought they were just soundclips from one of the many violent-cute-animal cartoons out there. Perhaps the voice could be more normal... or perhaps the characters could just speak gibberish. The story is simple enough that their tones of voice would be all that people need to understand them.
I like the colours. All of them. They contrast tastefully. Though I feel like the art style is too simple yet, it shouldn't become too complicated if you want to keep those great colour contrasts.
Thanks for the review and the song is called scatman by scatman.
FWAHAHA
That was bladdy hilarious matey! fwahahahhaha!