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Ok well here is my first real game. It was created from the tutorials found at Kongrgate Labs. Please leave some comments on how to improve the game.
good first try
i love how the ship looked the cut out art is cool. u know about sound so wont say anything there. as far as power ups go if u use dice maybe make them roll so u can pick what power up u are getting like 1 for health 2 for shield . u get the point but so far so good. gave u a 10 becuase its a good first try and i know it can be improved better
Great for a first submission, you'll make it far here.
Thanks for all the helpful comments. Im not much of a artist so the ships i did make looked like crap =] and there were sound effects they just got lost somehow... anyway i plan on making improvements and thanks again for not blaming my first flash =D
Good start - it works well and looks alright.
A couple of changes you could make:
Change the font to something that's more readable.
Make different powerup icons.
Put some more sound effects :)
yo, is that a nintendo zapper that you modeled your ship after?
Solid first try at a game/
I thought it was a good game and a great first attempt at a game. The controls were good and the animations were smooth I also loved the music play in the game.
The only problem U had with it was that the ships looked too 2D. I just thought they looked like cut outs. I also thought that your ships/explosions didn't fit the background. Since I thought they looked a little cartoony compared to the background. I also didn't get why the powerups were dice.
Well I thought it was a good game and I hope you consider my suggestions and best of luck on your future projects.
Hope I helped,
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