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It's not bad...I found it a little creepy for some reason though.

Good show my boy

Your theme is well displayed, and shows distinct talent in animation.

Make it more alive

Salam & Hello there!

Firstly, congrats on ur first flash ever!
Now, bak to business. I think u got alot of passion in animation, but u gotta be less lazy & animate more, especially Granpa's leg. Cuz he was walking, but he only dragging his leg with his stick & his leg r not moving at all!

Good try... GL!

makes me sad

I just woke up and you remind me of when my grandfather became really dementiatic with alzhiemer's and whenever he remembered that his wife (my grandmother) of more than fifty years was dead he would start crying. That sucks to be reminded of that, especially this early in the morning.

im confused

it was pretty rubbish but i was strngley moved by it : /