want to see more
only if you put forth alot of effort in th next one. needs voices and little bit more movement. also needs more in it but faster if you know what im trying to say. everything else aside this is a pretty good submition you got here.
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Procrast-metheus: The Saviour of Man (when he felt like it). This is a flash project I made a few weeks back for a project in my first year digital media class at Ryerson University in Toronto. Hope you enjoy!
I used default 12 fps (can u tell ;-) ) and thousands of frames -_-. I recorded most of the sounds myself, but also used Ryerson's royalty free sound library for some of the sounds.
I know some parts seem like they are in slow motion. I will fix that if I have time. Also a part two may be coming if I feel like it/have good feedback. Thanks!
Turtlebuoy-In-Thesea responds:
Yes, I know what you mean. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
eh...
long and a lil boring.....i could see it getting better just keep up the work. Animation was a lil bland, but the sounds were good.....
Turtlebuoy-In-Thesea responds:
Thanks for watching, I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy it.
Could be better...
First off, let me suggest you get actual voices rather than text. Not only is it good practice to animate mouths, but text is more reserved for Sprite animation these days. I also noticed that the animation seemed quite slow, might I suggest a button command to skip text if you use it, it makes things go faster for impatient people like myself. Although, you do receive my thanks for not abusing stick figure animation like 75 % of the people here.
Turtlebuoy-In-Thesea responds:
Thanks for the advice! I have a previous work that I haven't submitted yet with voices and mouth movement...so maybe you will enjoy that more. I could've done voices, but I chose not to. But I do agree on the speed of the animation, I'll need to work on that for next time.
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