Not bad
Yeah, it doesn't quite match up to f3 but this is by no means bad, even at this point, I can tell you have a great since of movement and timing. And it gives you a frame of reference as to how much you've advanced over time.
Author Comments
This is my first attempt at an animation, so be nice.
Also, the music on here is an older version of what I put in the sidebar, because what I used was deleted.
Voiceover responds:
I'm really happy you actually took the time to take a look.
its ok
take out the nice background and then you see this really didn't do much, but seeing as its your first attempt i'll give you credit for it being frame by frame ( this is frame by frame right? ). anyways i mostly liked the ending where the line did some tricks and if your going to make another one like this i suggest you do something mind-blowing. i don't know what that is exactly but just make something that will make people review this when they first see it.
Voiceover responds:
I am making more (and yes, it's a frame-by-frame), but don't expect anything extremely mind-blowing at first. It'll get more complex as I get better. My next one has less of the bouncing and more of the tricks, but it is getting hard at times to come up with anything new, since the second Frame is probably going to end up at about 3300 frames in length.
omg this is so much like one of my flashes
this is sooooooo much like my flash Mad Line Tricks, but im not trying to brag but mine had alot more changes...ah well if you care to see it its Mad Line Tricks and its located here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /465138
i rated it 4/5!
Voiceover responds:
Slightly similar...
I...
Like
Voiceover responds:
Thanks, should I do more?
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