Halloqween is sweet
My favrit holiday is this. not shur what toon was sayin but i like the mark at the end. maybe mark of the beast? why did lanterjack come from ass, makes no sense but is hilarious, i laughed, why cant you re wind.....
that was the weirdest thing i have ever seen X(
it was ok
it was ok
nothing to funny but nothing to sucky
its really sad when you first see the kid!50/100%
each star worth 10 points! when the kid got sad i just about bawled from sadness as if the kid was me!
Hey there! Thanks for dropping by and checking out my work. You asked for some feedback, so here's what I can pass onto you!:
Lip sync: It's usually best to 'snap' between mouth shapes rather than tweening between them. If you animate a frame ahead, it'll make your mouths slip into the audio very cleanly!
Posing: Try and avoid twinning (symmetry). Instead of just moving arms, move the whole form and let the other pieces follow. You might want to check out some of the old WB cartoons and watch for strong lines of action!
You have some strong ideas for shot composition, and voice/acting! That's all holding it together well
Of course this all comes with practice. You have the software down pat- just need to fine tune the animation fundamentals and you'll be on your way :)
(hope this helps!)
Thanks a ton! Feels GREAT to get some good tips from a good artist, I'll keep pushing forward and once again thanks for your help!