I'm going to be honest here:

Of all the "first flash submissions" I've seen, I'd have to say this one was really good. I'm not saying the movie was great, I'm just saying you're off to a good start. Your already better then the majority of Newgrounds so just keep practicing and one day, you will be a great animator. You can tween, and you can use sounds. Now just learn about smooth animating and that would be great. Just a word of advise, sprites show a very low animating ability, so try to sway away from them.

Happy flashing,
HOC

well...

the closet's not the only random thing here that was a pretty good flash movie. i give ya a 9/10!

Sweet

Cool little movie, loved the use of the old-game sprites.

5/5
9/10

lol'd

i lol'd at your first flash. seriously. the animation in most parts was ok, but otheres i laughed my ass off. All in all, it wasnt that bad. just the beginning sucked.

"KILLER IMP!!! muahahah"

Yay for FF!

The interacting dialogue is good, actually lets you go on whenever you want.
Sprite animation is brilliant. For your first flash it's really well done.