hmmmmmm

i think that was actually the point. just giving the small intro and the rest of the story unfolds in everyone's imagination.

"imagine" is the first word that appears, i think that, no matter what everyone says, this video was great cause it set the mood for the creation of a story, yet it did not control the story. we get to do it. it's like the author is saying: "it's your turn". I enjoyed it very much :D Too bad it was so short.

............uh.......did i miss something?

(Matt) What the heck dude!? That was really stupid. There was no action, no comedy, nothin! Seriously dude work on it! Oh my god.

Oh, is that it? Nothing happened.

Nothing happened it was just a 3D image of a submarine and some text, the text appeared to set up a story but then there wasn't any, the submarine hit the bottom, it said that they were trapped and then it ended. For an intro to a movie this would have been nice as the music you used created an atmosphere that drew you into the movie and it would have left you more hooked on the events that happened within the actual movie, but this turned out to be the whole movie, and this by itself as a movie is poor as nothing at all happened which just made it completely pointless. You needed to increase the fps as the animation was ever so slightly jerky, it was only just about noticeable but still.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

lame

that's it, lame

No backround information about those "trapped"

Good graphics. Change font color. I know white seems out of the question, but try grey font. Hard to read. Nice stolen music, I understand it is hard making a serious movie on newgrounds. Good luck.