ok.

This is why i hated it

No volume.
No real..action
this took 3 minutes to make.
No story line.

Good things.
You tried as best as you could, and you had a tiny mix of animation with real life.

I think you could do better.

wtf?

umm... no.

Bad... just bad...

The film was to grainy and when you "attacked" the animation on your shoulder it wasn't lined up correctly... you might want to try "mask" or something... It might work for you

mr williams...

i expect better of you mr williams you have dissapointed me...

...

It was pretty good, but don't you think that it should be longer?