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Super guy episode 1

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This might be a series if requested but this episode is just to show you what it is.

There is a robbery in town, who can stop it?

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Once again, the world is safe!

One criminal down, and the world is saved!
I must say, that was pretty darn funny

Anyway, the animation could be a little smoother, but nice effort nonetheless (but perhaps try a little harder). I suggest that you add more frames and color to make your flash look better. Getting a new vioce recording device would also help, but that really isn't neccessary.

So overall, this was a nice flash with a funny ending, but could have been worked a little harder on.

PS-I'm not not saying that I'm any better at animating than you, in fact, I'm probably worse.

that was... wow...

that was awful!
you tried, you put in sound, and it was ok,... i guess
so five.
yeah... it was very odd though...

Emilerules97 responds:


that was horrible

sound, story, animation was all horrible. can definatly use more work


Stupid plot, stupid idea, bad animation and drawing... Fail...

Since I have to have constructive criticism...

Very generic idea? Super guy?
Have your animations be more than two frames.
The plot was just... I can't even be constructive here, just scrap and start over...

Emilerules97 responds:

yeah, you review something when YOU HAVE SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


its glitchy at some parts, and also the guy all of a sudden says "oh look a robbery!"

Emilerules97 responds:

it was meant to be like that because 'random' makes me laugh.

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1.67 / 5.00

Oct 26, 2008
11:37 AM EDT