Predictable, in fact very predictable (Someone mentioned it before). Cause you already spell the answers out yourself, the title and the "due tomorrow" shows it/
Next on, the animation was a little hazy, maybe improve on the quality on it.
Up Next, i nearly yawn together with the character in the flash, maybe put some little actions within, it would make it more interesting.
And finally 5/10 because it still gave me a laugh!!
I would like to see the improvements!
Very good for a first try.
Better than many of the other flashes i've seen on here. Good Drawings.
at least it has a story to it.
Good if thats your first flash...
MOST PREDICTABLE FLASH EVER! Good job, I hope you get that award... anyways, Terrible graphics, lame story, basically pointless. Maybe if the movie wasn't called FATAL ERROR, and you didn't put the "Due Tomorrow" on the FUCKING LOADING SCREEN!! It took me literally one second to figure out what was going to happen.
too funny, its really good for your first flash, better then mine lol.