Goings On In DNA City PT1

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The Goings On In Dnalkcua City Part 1: Commercial District

Everyday is an interesting day in DNA City; bank robberies, nuclear explosions...

Sorry about the big file size...

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To Protect and eat doughnuts

Err not to sure what to write. Liked the little jokes like what was written on the cop car and bank. I'm guessing that this is meant to be part of a series. Is it just random stories in a city were things like this happen all the time? Is it meant to set the stage for characters living in this city? Is this line of questioning annoying? Music was good and seems well made.

KI1 responds:

Yeah, it's meant to be part of a series, the 2nd episode is kinda started, but I've sorta over-committed myself, I'm writing stories, music, drawing art and making several other flash movies and games. I'm not very good at coming up with storylines so, I decided to just make random stuff happen. Wow, I just watched it again and realized how crap it is >.< and yes, Waterflame is a great artist, thats why he won the Tank Award :D Um keep a look out for later flashes and thanks for your review! =3



Artwork: I see you did very well drawing the cars AND DNA City AND the buildings. How did you draw the cars in such a detailed manner?? HOW?

Length: Fairly long. Very good compared to what else I see in teh Portal! Nice job!
The filesize doesn't matter as long as there's a good movie that causes it! And besides, I've waited longer for flash files to load.

Animation: I like how you made the cars move! And the pursuit was genius!!
The explosions are ok, but ya can't expect much from a drawn explosion I guess. idk how those sprite makers do it! But I'm not saying you should switch to those! Drawing your own explosion shows that you put MOAR effort into it!

5/5 ; 9/10

KI1 responds:

YAY thanks. I didn't actually draw the all the cars myself they were done by Ericfull and n20 but I added the paint jobs bodykits and spoilers etc. as for the buildings I drew them myself using a technical drawing technique it took me a while though. Thanks for reviewing!!!!

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4.25 / 5.00

Oct 25, 2008
5:26 PM EDT