That was a good start. The graphics should be improved, and a definite end would be good as well. I lol'd at the end.
I lolz at the end to :D
Ok I guess, that said being nice.
I think it was simply the music that kept me watching, but yeah really work on those animations they're pretty crummy. Cheers to the ending though I sure liked it.
Oh my animating was that horrible was it :D at least my music kept you entertained. And the ending xD it was somewat humorous yes
Too random, work on the graphics and story
Honestly i acualy looked at my thing from a veiwer perspective and i saw that to but i still like it :D thanks for the respond
This isn't half bad
This flash is okay, but you should work on the graphics.They really sucked.Plus, it really wasn't that long.The sound was really clear though.The last part made me laugh.
Thanks for the critisism , So the sound is good but the Graphics = Shit?