That was a good start. The graphics should be improved, and a definite end would be good as well. I lol'd at the end.
Ok I guess, that said being nice.
I think it was simply the music that kept me watching, but yeah really work on those animations they're pretty crummy. Cheers to the ending though I sure liked it.
Too random, work on the graphics and story
This isn't half bad
This flash is okay, but you should work on the graphics.They really sucked.Plus, it really wasn't that long.The sound was really clear though.The last part made me laugh.