Review
Not much in the mood to type a long arse review about this so im just gonna try to keep it short.
my opinion is... it basicly sucked i didn't like it the voices were shit (sorry) bad animations and drawing.now that we have my opinions aside.
you can easily improve on this you just need time and dedication i'm guessing this took you half an hour to make am i right? well you cant just post this kinda quality on newgrounds just cause you want to i mean you dont have to post everything you make on here.
0/10 presentation
0/10 graphics
0/10 voices (sorry try getting generated voices or something or get a new mic)
How you can improve:
i notice the outlines on the people and shizz aint smooth you can smooth it out when you have the brush tool selected and then go to properties and there you have it. although it might be different on early macromedia flashes.
try working on your character's bodies try taking other people's drawings as references and try to look at and improve on their proportions cause to tell you the truth this kinda drawing reminds me of the time where i was in year 2 and we had to draw our selfs in art
hmm what else... oh yeah look at the super sweet tutorials on this website on the tutorial collection and learn from them it tells you great things
the lip syncing is not good. but don't worry cause its easy to get the right mouth gestures for the right letters just go to the tutorial collection i told you about and try to look up a lip syncing tutorial
well i told you i aint in the mood for big ass reviews... and now heres a big ass review hope it helps and shizz you can EASILY and i mean easily improve from this movie you just need dedication
hope to see better future movies from you
pm me if you need any help or anything i dont mind :P