To the guy below me, he's just an idiot.
They were pretty great: Fluid, and NOT CHOPPY.
It got a little boring after awhile, so maybe you could have made...some thing happen.
I'll try. XD
that just sucked
Worst pivot iv ever seen
Worst review iv ever seen
no, just no.
I suppose everyone has to start somewhere, but this is unimaginative, lacking fluid movement and is, im afraid to say, just very cliche. theres hundreds of things out there like this, and nothing sets this apart.
2 for effort, but next time but some more time into your work.
So, what you're saying is, that every single pivot flash out there deserves a 2? Narf Pivots? Stick figures on crack?
Choppy, not fluid, no plot. Fail.
CHOPPY?!?!? How is this choppy? No plot... I think you could have ignored that. It was not a fail.
And it's hard to take this as good advice considering you have no flash and no audio.
That was crap. I have seen better in pivot. You just need to get a little better
The scores are getting lower and lower with each review.