Not bad
for a first animation , I kinda liked it
Author Comments
Hi, its my first animation and i would really like if you will rate it and write a comment.
this animation is liked "zommed out" coz i dont know how to "move" camera, plus it have lot ofstick :P
hope you like it!
and plese rate it as a first and overall :)
Not bad
Not bad for a first. The animations were pretty well done. Could use some sound, and, of course, some actual plot. Keep it up.
D3struct0r responds:
im sorry, but what is a "plot" :P
2 and I'll tell you why...
For a first animation, yerh it was pretty good but I'm sure I've seen the same kind of flash before
My advice would be to get yourself some sort of microphone or even to just add effects from a SFX website, Take your time with a flash (A great flash can take weeks if not months) and finally, try make it original man. Something no ones seen before, that's what grabs the viewers by the nads and gets you your 10 stars.
Hope this helped, dude
D3struct0r responds:
i have a broken microphone, is that good??? =D lol.
what do you mean origial?
did doe one else did that kind of animation?
and ill try to come up with a new idea
All you need is sound.
Some kind of sound would have been nice, maybe something from the audio portal? Other than that, for a first animation, this was pretty good.
:D
D3struct0r responds:
ok, ill use sound effects on mnext one :)
dude
it was ok but it was choppy and could have been better