I really liked the concept. I'm not a fan of Coldplay and the song after was a little annoying but I really liked where you were going with it.
amimating wasnt good
this isnt good but i understand the storyline the scientist's invention made him remember the person he killed and he mourns for that person in his hallucination but the rest i dont get spend more time on it watch it yourself and ask is this a good flash? to yourself if the answer is no then keep trying to get it good
best of luck
For a first flash, the animation is'nt half bad. And it SEEMS (keyword:seeems) to be mostly origanal. theres just 1 big problem. WTF is it about? it dosent make sence.
It's suppose to be trippy, so the fact that it doesn't make any SENSE is quite obvious ;) stay tuned for episode two instead, where explenations and that shit happens xD