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This is my first real submission, not expecting much from it but had fun making it (:.
PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK, you'd be suprised as to how helpful it is.
well....i think you have something here
Okay, your drawings and animation was really good for your first. Now take that and put it into some sort of plot, and have voices. Also get rid of the flashing background, that extremely annoys me and could really hurt someone. I recommend that you take time to draw out your backgrounds, not really detailed or anything but enough to say that those are mountiains and there is a lake...something like that.
And I can't say that I understand how time consuming it is to make a submition, but I know enough to see that theres about 90% that hasn't had much time put in. Try not to rush and get lots of info from friends. You can get more ideas put in if you involve your friends.
The only entertainment I get out of this is taking pills for the pain I get in my eyes and head. Those little characters would make some nice avatars for websites or something.
what has science done to you and make you go nuts
it needs more then that..
but its nice.
I liked the choice of song and the characters, however it continued to loop and the music went on for evermore. Also the epeliptic-unfriendly background brings your movie into the same realm as kitty krew and these new spam-goons, which really is where angels fear to tread. If you could vary it a bit it might make a decent music vid. Keep trying.
Never thought of that :/
Damn kitty Krew >:[
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