mmmmkay

its ok,
not the worst shit ive had al1 day,,,

Let's See...

The animation was pretty good. Nice artwork. For me this needed to be longer and it was almost pointless. If it was just a test, nice job. Try and add a storyline. But otherwise 7/10 4/5

was really cool

I really liked it, I thought it was cool.

Ok... a few suggestions...

Not too bad for one of your first flashes, but if you are interested in doing this in the long term, like Joe Zombie-ish stuff, then there are a couple of things you might want to consider.

1- Get a couple of good artists together along with yourself, and work on a big project, either off of something else,(ex: Super Mario Bros. Z by: Alvin-Earthworm) or you could make your own stuff, like Joe Zombie.

2- Don't fight on just one slab of land! Have a zombie, for instance, throw the protaginist into another fighting zone, such as a jungle, or a military base. But whatever you do, change position at least once. If you don't do that, at least make the peice of land you're fighting on big, with random obstacles and boxes. (ex: Shock 2)

3- Get a plot! Instead of just mindless killing, (whicch is kinda cool, I must admit) get a plot such as- The zombie killer was captured by a zombie group, somehow managed to escape, an then wanted revenge on all zombies for the zombies killing his family or whatever.

4- Look around on Audio portal, PM some great artists(Evil-Dog,ParagonX9,etc) to see if you could use some of their work, and then you're flash sounds great, and you and the artists get props!

If you follow those guidelines, you should be "King of the Portal" in no time!

tov!

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