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A new guy comes to the desk and nobody appreciates him.
Good points and bad points
Good Points - I thought it was quite funny, I like the way the cat thing eats the guy's arm and then says "I'm Okay" after it gets shot, that was great. That style of random comedy works for me - sometimes.
Bad Points - the clay models / figures were awful, try and make them look slightly more lifelike
Finally - the animation was actually quite good, although there is a lot of room for improvement.
Nice to see a young guy with some follow through. Keep at it...the story lines will come.
i think some of the reviews are a little harsher than they need to be. You tried, it wasn't successful. Just work on a script more and the voice acting again and I think you'll do fine.
Claymation takes no effort, just time =/
Plus, get your older brother to do your voice acting, because it's awkward listening to a 9 year old try to be funny for 3 minutes.
i GUESS the comedy was OKAY, but it wasn't as good as it could be.
how long did it take you to do this? I know claymation is very hard
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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