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Disaster on Dark Street

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This was called "Deadly Disaster on Dark Street", but I shortened the name. Well, this is my first movie. Enjoy. Sorry for no audio.


Go here to view the story:

http://asteinborn78.ej.am/story_1.pdf


UPDATE: The text was unreadable. That is fixed.

UPDATE 2: Added sound, added in fleeing.

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good work liveswif lives on

I looked at it for a cpl of secounds

Its a zoomed out pdf file. Put something in it for me to criticise please. What was that animation ?

Whoa!

Way too fast! way too small! way too short!

How the hell did this pass judgement?

iMate900 responds:

Why would you ask?

Sucks

This sucked. The words were too small, it went too fast, animation was bad, and it was boring.

iMate900 responds:

goin' be... longer... with sound.

ahm

critique= its too fast and short

iMate900 responds:

it'll be slow and a bit longer.

Credits & Info

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3,777
Votes
8
Score
1.32 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 18, 2008
7:14 PM EDT
Genre
Action
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