I looked at it for a cpl of secounds
Its a zoomed out pdf file. Put something in it for me to criticise please. What was that animation ?
Way too fast! way too small! way too short!
How the hell did this pass judgement?
Why would you ask?
This sucked. The words were too small, it went too fast, animation was bad, and it was boring.
goin' be... longer... with sound.
critique= its too fast and short
it'll be slow and a bit longer.