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Disaster on Dark Street

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This was called "Deadly Disaster on Dark Street", but I shortened the name. Well, this is my first movie. Enjoy. Sorry for no audio.

Go here to view the story (remove spaces):
ht tp :// asteinborn 78. ej. am/ story_ 1. pdf

UPDATE: The text was unreadable. That is fixed.
UPDATE 2: Added sound, added in fleeing.

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I looked at it for a cpl of secounds

Its a zoomed out pdf file. Put something in it for me to criticise please. What was that animation ?



Whoa!

Way too fast! way too small! way too short!

How the hell did this pass judgement?


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iMate900 responds:

Why would you ask?


Sucks

This sucked. The words were too small, it went too fast, animation was bad, and it was boring.


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iMate900 responds:

goin' be... longer... with sound.


ahm

critique= its too fast and short


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iMate900 responds:

it'll be slow and a bit longer.

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3,371
Votes
248
Score
2.05 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 18, 2008
7:14 PM EDT
Genre
Action
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