LF2:The Alliance Ch.1

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***This series is the continuation of "LF2:A Hunter's Quest"***
***If at anytime you are confused on the plot, please refer to the previous series. All episodes on Newgrounds.com***
***You can also find the episodes on my profile page and included in this movie under the "Info" section.***
***Thank you and enjoy the movie.***



I don't hear very good the voices, but i like it...

Good, but...

The kid and the village, that's too much away from LF2 style.
Maybe you can ask people who likes LF2 too for sprites, for example from LF2-Empire website (not to advertise, there's really some good spriters there)


this is like a boring chuck norris movie...
"good" men go together without any conflicts, they fight the "bad" men; there are no smart things behind this; no metaphors.. anything...
the voices suck hard and sound too childish; metal music;
there isnt even any story behind this... only good vs. the bad.
theres no bad or good in reality... everybody fights for a reason.
pyron you suck hard
I gave you 4 for the animation... but 5/5 because of the effort

PyronX responds:

I agree this was a bad start to the next series.
If you are looking for plot I do suggest checking the Author Comments where I do explain this is continued from LF2:A Hunter's Quest.
I still encourage watching the following episodes.
Thank you for your comment.

A worthy effort after all that time!

So I've reached - with a circle - back to the series I first started viewing. Decided to rate and critique the previous one first though.

Now that I see it - you improved VERY greatly when compared to the last series. Really big congrats on you for that.

The same criticisms that were present during the last 6-9, however, are still here.
We STILL don't know nigh anything about Dennis/Woody/Davis. You really have to fix that at some point. It's really not hard inserting a short dialogue somewhere about them discussing why they are doing what they are doing and how they know each other - in passing.

Same goes for Deep. He is a guy who just completed his sword...
So... who is he besides that? Why does he want to fight hunters, when did those hunters start terrorizing the village? Why did our band of heroes come to this village specifically? So many questions! And I believe you have just forgotten to answer them, rather than to savor the reveal.

The voice acting was pretty good actually! The child was a bit awkward though... But he actually had a purpose! Nice touch!
Deep really could have shown more on his motivations of joining some random dudes in a conquest to save the world though. :P The thing that is commendable about him, though, is that you really can show his character through his voice. That is well portrayed.

Voice acting a bit too silent though...

That's all!

Very well done, overall, though! I keep talking about the bad things, but I actually enjoy these, or I wouldn't be spending so much time writing all these reviews.

PyronX responds:

Thank you for your review, very informative.
You are right, I definently could have beefed up the plot more in this one and build Deep's character more.
I DO promise to do so in future episodes. I'm also apologize for the short response to your well thoughtout review. You covered a lot of points I missed out on.
Once again thank you for your review.

Nice start up.

Looks like a great beginning to a good series, Voices were abit quite, I hope that improves in the next one :D. Good work and I look foward to continuation.

PyronX responds:

I agree, I had a hard time trying to time everything, but I got a better system I'll be applying for the next one.

Thank you for your review and vote :)

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4.33 / 5.00

Oct 17, 2008
12:20 PM EDT
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