The only thing I found scary was wondering if that little girl had to live in all that clutter or if it was a set. Get her a pillowcase. I'm still hoping it was a set. Flash? *grumble*
Nope not a set. We just live in Sloth. Come on man - what the hell?
It wasn't that bad for your first try, but it wasn't scary at all, and It was a little bit boring. I hope your next project will be a little bit better :)
not bad for a first try
but there is absolutely no suspense or fright felt from your shots, cuts, acting, or underscore. If you tried editing it more or taking additional shots this might work.
It really wasnt all that creepy or scary just weird.... i found myself bored watching it