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this might be a small couple of episodes i dont know. this one is about introducing a maple character there aint much action.

my first sprite submission so yeh

the next episode he goez nuts :P!

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(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Maplestory sprites are pretty neat to use, they are very defined. Animation wasn't bad, storyline ended up not being so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly a bit boring for most of the time. Needs some more realistic dialogue and needs to move a bit faster. Keep working on it...not bad for being your first sprite animation.

not bad

It's off to a pretty good start. The text at the beginning was hard to read but it seemed to fix itself. One thing I must say is USE PROPER PUNCTUATION. You can take the greatest idea and if you don't put the little things into it like that it will never be taken seriously or professionally, and will bother a lot of people. You obviously put effort into the flash, now put effort into the text and story. If your grammar isn't too good then please ask someone to check it! Keep it up!

not too bad

its short so idk about the plotline but it could go somewhere i guess.

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3.00 / 5.00

Oct 16, 2008
4:57 AM EDT