Good!
What only needsa fix are the movements. The rest is alright! Another thing, you've got the advantage of making a ball character! Everyone loves ball characters! Awesome flash, anyway!
Author Comments
Yes. The sequel is already up.
I know it's fast.
Again, I thank Chris Bugaj and Ryan Jew!!
Anyway, in this installment, a monster *green goblin rippof* with a magic pencil of his own attacks our nameless hero!! WILL HE SURVIVE!?! It's a short one, so yeah. The next one is VERY long though. That one's gonna take a while.
ENSOI!!
wow you got alot of crappy reviews.. ass holes
but yeah dude this reminds me of that game Okami. and that was pretty epic :P
varunvaid95 responds:
thanks :)
Hey it could use some work.
But it's not bad!
varunvaid95 responds:
Neither is your review!
Has potential
This animation seems to have potential but it is way too short, it needs to be alot longer but more to do with the plot rather than just fighting. The animation seems ok but maybe you need better backgrounds and also you need some music or sound in there. Basically you just need to make it longer and a bit more robust. The key is not to rush and take as long as you want as it will come out better and you may learn some new skills in the process.
varunvaid95 responds:
Thanks.
short
its too short but it was still good, u could use more combat where they actually draw things with their pencils more than just once. anyway, good job!
varunvaid95 responds:
thnx