The sequel to my hit movie 'Ninja Kids Adventure'! In this movie, Amake and Hanzo face a foe beyond their wildest dreams! Be prepared for the FIGHT OF YOUR LIFE!!!
hmm well...
... it is a big improvement on the first one, but maybe if you did some longer scenes[ lol dont listen to me i cant even spell o.O...anyway] and different areas then youd get a nine :P, i remember last time when ppl criticised your "lack of movement" but now i can see its on purpose >< keep it up, im looking forwards to your next one to see how it turns out :)
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i love how donald just causually shows up out of no where. lol this was good. =]
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Getting Better
I watched your previous one and this is a big improvement.
There was some actual humor, this time and the viewing perspective changed, that helps.
I think you really need to move on from the "cursing is humorous" school of thought. That's just annoying.
The thing with Donald randomly appearing and their inability to fight him because he had better graphics was a nice touch.
I have a bad habit of cursing. I need to clam myself down. Thanks for the advice.
Too much space...
The conversation was bland (especially important as this flash revolves solely around it). The first was kind of funny to me because the insults were long and there was not quite enough time to read them. There was also a small amount of irony in the plot. In this admission, the arguments were not clever or ironic, and there was to much space. There also lacked a strong plot and there were no noticable attempts at irony.
The irony is that Donald actually despises Starbucks! Damn.
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Fucking funny dude. I love the 5 frames bit rofl. Although I do got to say, I got kinda dizzy from the looking left...then right...then left...then right...then left...then right...my head hurts...
My apologies.