Points too improve
Ok, first, I think it was pretty good. Quite simple but good. However, I think that you can do a lot better for your other movies. I don't know a thing in how to make flash, but here is a couple of suggetions I made for you.
1) Music : You movie is some kind of "empty" I think because there is no music for it. I think that ading some could help you a lot. one for the ordynary battles, one for the boss battles, one when the base will self destruc and other. Just search for midi in google or yahoo and you should find some.
2) Sounds: You used a couple of sounds for explosions, slashes and other. I think that you could put some more for other actions(ex: your caracter are robotic. Add some metallic sounds when they move, junp, ...) and/or just add a few more because you're always using the same (ex: You could have three sounds for the slashes, two for the guns, two for explosions and others). And you could add sounds for other actions like a charging sound when Fefnir is chargind is gun.
3) Minsc: Some little details could make your movies better without too much work I guess. First, add a "play" button before the video start and a "replay?" button at the end. A quality button could be a good idea if you improve your graphics(or put more action at the same time) and a scene selection if you make a longer one(witch I hope you will do).
4) Screan : Ok, I think this one could be more complexe but, if you want a challenge, you can try and I would be pleased to give you my opinion. I think that playing with the screan could really improve your video. You could shake it when they break the door/wall or when one of them would put a powerfull attack. You could add flashing effects in the same situations. I think that if your movie was in a bigger screan it woul be better. More space for fight so you could move more your caracters (I actually think that they are too static so making them move more could be a good idea.) and you could make some "zoom in" and "zoom out" effect wich are really nice I think.
5) Good points: Ok, I said a lot of things I think you could do to improve your videos. It doesn't mean I fund it bad or anything, I just want you to get better. There is some goods point in your submission. I really liked the way you made your caracters speak. I think that, for a first movie, you have a good sens of the action and more. Keep up the good work!^^
I think that's all. If you're lost i my suggestions and you don't know what to do I really suggest you to add music fisrt. I think it is the main point. If you liked this review and fund it helpfull (wich I really wishe) and you would like to have more hints for your next submissions, don't hesitate to contact me with my Newgrounds account. I have a few good links that I could send you for more sprite, music and sound if you're interested but I think that I can't put them here so you will have to contact mee if you want them. I wish that I helped you and if you make an other submission(wich I really hope for) contact me so I could give you more hint.
keep up the good work.
William Side
