Ytown Public 5

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Haha! Check out the TRIVIA-GAME, but be sure NOT TO MISS THE MOVIE!!!

If anyone manages to beat the Trivia - please let me know :)

This episode has taken very much hard work! Please wait for it to load.

Thanks for the support!

Story so far: Barbara and the Bear have beaten the Newton-Clones in space and taken over their ship. Now they fly back to Earth and crash into the school!


the plot thickens...

damn, youi just keep throwing in more and more random stuff. very good still and still very funny.

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'Bout time!

I know, I know. It takes a while to dish these things out but it sure has been a while since your last one! Looking forward to more!

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McRhyme responds:

It does take a LONG time, I'm unemployed - I don't do anything else! The reason why this one took a bit longer than the others way that I was on vacation one week, and I have also already finished the 6:th episode! Haha! So all you gotta do is wait another one or two days (while I make a new and more advanced TRIVIA) and then come back and see the FINAL EPISODE!

While CU is getting crapier and less funny

This series is getting better. Keep it up

McRhyme responds:

Thanks! Hehe... Yeah, CU sure is lacking! I really like CU2 the rest is average. YP has better graphics, sound, MUSIC, story AND eh... jokes?

Haha! Megalomaniac? Wouldn't you be?!

I would not recommend this, but it wasn't bad at all. It's mostly because it did have a pretty funny and unexpected ending. I wasn't expecting them to all die. Wait, the bear was okay, right? I love the design of the Tera Eraser. It was quite nice to stand out in contrast to the mostly cheesy animation.

I think the voices need work. There wasn't that much distinction. Wouldn't Newton already be dead? I guess this eraser is a good shot. Of course, in reality, they probably wouldn't even last THAT long.

alambadodi alambadodiladidey

And I see that you need a /real/ animating job...

But yeah. This is pretty good stuff. But perhaps no better than Ytown 4, bar the quiz.

I'm not entirely sure if I like the way you've got the normal characters goggling at stuff. Maybe you could take a leaf out of the Japanese' book and for comic situations draw a kawaii version of the characters, against either a blank or psychadelic background?

Has the voice actor for Glory Gal changed? I just noticed that she sounded really 'stilted' when she was talking about taking a photo...

2nd last thing (this isn't a criticism - merely a suggestion) - at some points, the subtitles were hard to read, because the backgrounds were a similar colour to the text. Maybe you could make the ubtitles roll across the screen? Or maybe you could make the characters have speech bubbles or something...

Lastly, to be honest, I didn't find this amazingly funny.

But, then, I didn't find the earlier episodes that funny, but I enjoyed watching them for the plot. And this one certainly didn't disappoint in this respect.

I liked a lot of the bits which I'm not going to spoil for other people.

I also really liked the quiz, and the 'reward' was really good. Whilst coding a scrolling engine, I decided to lidten to it for some strange reason, and I started laughing like a madman in the middle of the class! Certainly cheered me up, after having coding problems...

Yeah. This is a pretty tight series you've got going here, and it's definitely one of the better NG series. But there's still room for improvement.

Oh, and I like the idea about the sub-series. But have a preloader to THAT. Make it so that you can do the character bios and background story bit until the quiz loads, then you do the quiz until the sub-series loads, then you get to watch that until the proper movie loads!!!!

It'd be maqdness!!!

But, it'd be great. And hysterical. (Or, mildly amusing at least.)

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McRhyme responds:

Yeah, thanks for reminding me to make a TRIVA again and but it in the preloader. It's pretty sad you don't think things have gotten better since #4. I think this episode has a much cooler story (but AL in #4 is hard to beat). No "movie link" this time. In #4 I was thinking of "2001 a space.." with AL and all.

Yupp, maybe I made a couple of googled eyes this time. I think the opening scene with Fred screaming is fun (not beautiful). I have chosen to go for "add on"-google eyes when they get excited. Looks okay - The best thing about it is that I can animate the eyes really easy, making them look around and increase bust.. sorry eye-size at any time. In #2 I used a phsyco effect when Newton charged Giga. The background was white. Sometimes I use a blue manga style background, but I don't want to over to it and start looking like Pokémon. Glory is still played by my sister, but I think she had had a hard day :)

I could make a small background for subtitles, no sweat!

I have learnt by now that you don't laugh very easily. Nor do I - But I find the series amusing and I SMILE.

I'll try to make the TRIVA and SUBSERIE (it will be comic like-not animated)

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3.58 / 5.00

Mar 5, 2002
12:33 AM EST
Comedy - Original