This is alot better than the first..
However, you need to add some music in areas that require it, like your opening title screen and your more subtle moments when the main characters are meeting in a specific spot. Just remember too that your story needs to be a bit more complex also, so add a little more unexpected twists and perhaps even more dialogue.
This has alot of potential! Just continue working on it, i'm sure this will actually be a very great story and will give alot of positive results.