Another good one
Submissions such as this one here today are differant, sometimes unique but always exciting, so throughout this review today i will suggest some new possibilities on improving, but as far as i can see now, it was a good entry. OK so i saw the other one and was pretty impressed with what you had going on, and like that one this one is pretty good aswell, and this was another great idea allthough it was the same as the other but still good i thought, Now i did mention in the last one that the buttons and some added color could be a better option inimproving this, i will go into more detail later but that would be a big plus on your part. Very impressed, that was my lasting impression on this piece, allthough there are some areas that you could have dones this or that differant and a touch more efort, but for the most of this i was pretty impressed and liked what you had to offer.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some of these types of entries are hard to give some good feedback into making them better, but i think i can muster up some ideas here, just look into the advice and ideas and go with it, just try and make it work. So making the buttons larger and more fancy would be a big plus on this, also adding some color and some colored backrounds would be another plus on your part.
Really a quality dressup, and I liked the whole "freaky" theme. However, I agree with the person below me, that it needs to have checkboxes, instead of just "roll over them accidentally and it changes" ones.
Also, what's up with the mature rating? I didn't really see anything that could really be considered not child-safe, or at least teen safe. I kept expecting... something. Anything mature. Just because of that, I made a reasonably sexy creature (though that probably says more about me that it should).
Anyway, great game.
Thanks for the review! Didn't see it before now but I've been on a loong vacation.
An updated and easier to use version was posted here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /467202
Really don't know why the "mature" rating come from. Will see if I can change it.
A reasonably fun creature creator with nice art. Only issue is that accidentally rolling over a box will change a body part selection into that box's selection. Make it to where you have to click, to avoid pointless frustration.
Thanks for the hi grade!
Will probably implement the fact that you have to click the buttons in next version.
Theres plenty of variation and the art's not too bad. But the buttons are a little too small and close together. If you can if you can fix that up it would be much better.
Thank you for your review.
I am gathering opinions to se what can be improved. Really don't have time for this ;)
Problem with the small buttons is not that big when one watch it at it's original resolution (which is 1024 x 640 px or even bigger in fullscreen - http://www.dawnland.com/playground - newgrounds have a width limit of 800 pixels.)
I really like it
It was a lot of fun and a surprising amount of variation. I only have one major problem with this - the buttons are very awkward.
I have the same kind of buttons in my digital portfolio (rollover, small squares, no titles, i.e.), and it's a great idea to use these because they are delicious eye candy. The issue here is that your buttons are way too close.
Also, the (DRAG) and (+ / -) changed the target object as well as the entire button panel! With some fixes in these departments, you'll have a decent game.
Thank you very much for your long review.
Well - 12-13 variations of each body part make many combinations...
Yes - I am aware of the "problem" with the + and - buttons Will fix that with the next release.
Am gathering opinions to se what can be improved. Really don't have time for this ;)
Problem with the small buttons is not that big when one watch it at it's original resolution (which is 1024 x 640 px or even bigger in fullscreen - http://www.dawnland.com/playground - newgrounds have a width limit of 800 pixels.) But I guess I could make the space between them a bit bigger. Or just change the part when one click the button.